Wanted help to get better english

[fingroo]

english help

Hi, in order to participate in an electronic conference. I have read an article, but because my low level of English they told me to rewrite it. Can you please help me; I join it in this post.
If you change or add some words please use red colour or underline.

 

[Abenarif]

Re: english help

try https://translate.google.co.uk/ it's very nice and powerful

Added after 2 minutes:

حاول من موقع قوقل للترجمة من اللغة الانجليزية الى العربية او الفرنسية
وهذا هو الموقع مباشرة جاهز

https://translate.google.com.ly/

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