Is this a good cover letter?

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here it is:

"Dear Sir,

I'm currently pursuing my Master of science in Microwave Engineering at Munich unversity of technology (TUM), Germany. I have done an undergraduate projects in microwave circuit design and I want to learn more as a part of your innovative team. I am eager to work at your company to extend my knowledge in this area. I'm looking for an internship from February 13, 2004 until April 20, 2004. I thank you in advance for consideration. "

thanks

ayhz2002
 

you should get it proof read for proper grammer..

i'd go through the effort, but i see your post is Nov. 18th and is probably too late.

but for anyone reading this in the future , always ALWAYS get atleast 2 people to critically review your resume/cover letter for grammer, sentence structure and spelling.

1 error = no job for you

Mr.Cool
 

i think its good
vasu doing M Tech VLSI
bye
 

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